This is the final proposal, the unnecessary elements were removed and the interview and a few description were given.
This is the wider context, I've changed the font and make it a bit more interesting eventhough it's a boring word submission.
This is the specific context, same thing, I made it more interesting. I also made further reading because I believed my points were not so clear from the wider context.
Yet another boring stuff.... the references.. my gosh I hate this... but I tried to make it more interesting as well.
As a review I was told that I should show all my research work in the presentation and I should cite my resources during my presentation and not during the QnA section, like the way I did.
As for the design I was told that it's quite complex to read and that I should perhaps add a disclaimer about the region whereby the research was conducted.
The biggest demographic was from Asia, mostly Malaysia however the biggest number of practitioners I got was from Mauritius, my home country and the point that was given was that maybe only Mauritians feels more satisfied with their religious practice while other don't. There's still this uncertainty within the survey.
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