SOI Finale

From last time, I did this one. I added a key so that I can send it for review to my lecturer. There was basically 3 main topic in this though.

I was told to remove the points highlighted in dark brown.

So I started working on a new draft.

I decided to think about the ideas that I wanted to implement in my brand identity last semester for 'The Professional' brief.

I started creating my new draft from there then. Yet again I made sure that I have elements from various different sources.

I carefully generated the elaborations to try my best to get all the points while showing the relations between them as my lecturer suggested.

Always checking on the points I wrote them down into paragraphs.

I then created a new draft which was to serve me as a prefinal. I showed the relation between the 10 points and the paragraphs I wrote. And I added the Annotated Bibliography as well.

I was told to rephrase, reduce some sentences and find better words for a few sections while adding some in-text citation. And that's basically what I did here.

And I was told to narrow down..... yet again.... So I did.

I kept the previous version since it was way better compared to the others. And I simply removed the idea of reducing carbon emission, despite I feel really inspired about this idea and I included an Airbnb case study, which I think, to who reads my blog regularly, if ever there is.... anyone... will get bored of hearing about this project since I mentioned it so much here.

I'm a lot more confident about this version since this type of Advertising was what I wanted to turn into my main profession whenever I can. So including it in the SOI sort of help defining my point better.

I've also checked back to the criteria we were given to make sure I considered them all or at least most of them, which I believe I did. And I've drawn the focus more on the society since.... I think there's a lot of it that bothers me, so... more inspiration.. haha

And Finally..... This is the final SOI. I did a very simple layout but it actually has my brand identity. Very formal, but I believe it relates to my main subject here, which is society.