The Road so Far pt. 4
- Ahmad Ahseek
- Feb 16, 2020
- 2 min read
Updated: Mar 2, 2020
Well, well.. I believe that the previous concept is really strong and I would love to work on it however just to assure my progression, I did another concept, a more simplified one just in case my previous idea gets rejected.
This idea is similar to the previous on as I said it's a simplified one. It talk about a pessimist but more in the sense that he want to be like others but he can't.
These lines are just a basic progression of the animation.
Then I wrote this to try to bring some emotions and depth to the story.
And I ended it with a sort of conclusion, claiming if you're a pessimist, be a pessimist.
YEAH............
I'm so not proud of this one 😂 🤣😂 🤣😂 🤣😂 🤣😂 🤣😂 🤣
But anyway, I believe I might get some suggestion to improve it..
(One man walks the streets and all dies, Amongst the bright ones who walks away, He seeks what they have, 10 tons of sugar cubes he buys, But grey his world remains.)
{well I might have make a few mistakes while writing this one}
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